IVG Halloween Special Page 13

16th Jun 2019, 12:00 AM in IVG Halloween Special Part 1
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IVG Halloween Special Page 13
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nicholasmalara 16th Jun 2019, 12:00 AM edit delete
Coming up next... The exciting origin story of Inspector Von Ghoul continues in "The Terror of Terrors Part 2!"

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MK_Wizard 16th Jun 2019, 5:25 AM edit delete reply
MK_Wizard
So can we expect a round 2?
nicholasmalara 16th Jun 2019, 8:19 AM edit delete reply
Oh yes! Sleepy Hollow has not seen the last of the Horseman!
RazorD9 16th Jun 2019, 10:33 AM edit delete reply
RazorD9
Nor Van Ghoul it seems.
MK_Wizard 16th Jun 2019, 1:10 PM edit delete reply
MK_Wizard
Or Von Ghoul. Is it weird that I find him charming? He reminds me of my husband. He's a professional with a good noble heart and he's a grounded kind of good looking.
nicholasmalara 17th Jun 2019, 12:18 PM edit delete reply
Not at all! Von Ghoul was designed to have some charisma. He's certainly a strong-silent type!
...(RockB) 16th Jun 2019, 6:21 AM edit delete reply
...(RockB)
Yay! Very good page, I love in-story explanations!

Though one might wonder how Van Ghoul knows all he said in panel 2. Maybe he concluded most of it by studying the history of previous appearances, from newspapers, but that about "Something powerful ...", idk, did he conclude it from the physical strength of the rider? He seem quite confident about it.
nicholasmalara 16th Jun 2019, 8:25 AM edit delete reply
Thanks for your questions. The truth is, he wasn't certain about the Horseman's weakness. Because of that, I realized I didn't write page 12 very well, so I went back and changed his dialogue on that page. Check it out and see if that makes more sense to you! I wasn't very satisfied with page 12's writing anyway, and I think the changes I made does the story a bit more service. As to the "something powerful" he alluded to... yes, after fighting him, Von Ghoul understood more about the Horseman's strength.
...(RockB) 16th Jun 2019, 10:45 AM edit delete reply
...(RockB)
Ohh... :)

I went 4 pages back to get a better idea of the bigger picture.

I'd say the flow of page 12 alone is a lot better now and the flow over the last few pages up to here is also much better!

Also! I love it that Van Ghoul didn't solve the case once and for all, leaving room for the events of the Sleepy Hollow movie to take place. I find great pleasure in such "connections" being made or at least not rendered impossible. Thank you very much, I'm having goosebumps now :)